Sunday, August 17, 2014

My Age Past Comments

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That summer was so fanatic
Lane the strokes all around
In that futile waves a stoop arise
Holy sprout from some side
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Heather Wilkins 21 August 2014

life might be short but we live in eternity. the soul will live forever excellent write

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 August 2014

It is all about eternity.......all may perish but soul that keeps the whole universe going ceaseless.....very well penned

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Akhtar Jawad 17 August 2014

Parvin Shakir said-Woh to khusboo hay hawaon mein bikhar Jaega- -Masala phool ka hay phool kidhar jaye ga. The soul within us is the soul of God and it is immortal, like a tree that survives even in autumn. A lovely poem.

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Salini Nair 17 August 2014

life is like a tree...it sprouts and falls..but the tree will remain there..likewise birth happens and later death...but the basic power (God) remains the same....

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