Sunday, August 23, 2009

_my Age Of Enlightenment Comments

Rating: 2.9

My heart was blind to enlightment,
but it will now begin to clear,
alone, alone under earths firmament.
I can not cower from my fear.
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Peya Jakob
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There is a beautiful flow of poetic enlightenment with this poem and impeccable rhyme. The first four lines speak such positive words, then heartfelt loneliness is introduced yet accepted 'my heart has loves and I have grown, to see humanity and never care'. The imagery in the last two lines is haunting. 10 love Karin

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