Monday, May 5, 2014

My Age Comments

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I wish to tear my flesh apart
and show the world
my lifeless heart
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Hira Ahsan
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Saadat Tahir 20 June 2014

nice poem...written in a classical format with nice rhyming A great message to boot v nice liked

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Hira Ahsan 06 May 2014

Thank you so much dear Regards Hira Ahsan

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Bill Cantrell 05 May 2014

There is a time for many where life and age don't seem to be meant for each other, your poem does an excellent job of showing this..good emotion and excellent rhyme, nice work!

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