Monday, July 24, 2017

My Aesthetic Sense Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am an over ambitious man
I am in search of my ideal.
she must be so beautiful
that fairies of heaven when look at her are paralyzed.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Luz Hanaii 27 September 2018

Thanks for clarifying about your poem. For a minute I thought it was about your wife. I see now it's a metaphor. Thank you for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 June 2018

A great metaphorical write about the enigma of politics. Thought provoking beautifully crafted.10

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Savita Tyagi 31 July 2017

Hahaha Akhtar ji you have good sense of humor. Though I doubt with a wife like yours you really looked for somebody else!

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My mighty wife took advantage of it. My failures to find my ideal gave her an opportunity to capture my body and soul. What could I do? Now, I am her slave. Might is right! O My God! Akhtar Sahab! Ha ha ha! You wife rightly deserves every bit of your body, heart and soul. Appreciating and proud of your mighty wife! God bless her! Aesthetic poem with a bright sense of humour! 100+++ This is for your wife who has captured your body and soul. :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 July 2017

Hahahahah... your wife is lucky that you did not find your angel. Go on looking for one and i bet you won't find one better than your wife. Very nice poem. Enjoyed.

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