Thursday, May 19, 2005

My Advice For Growning Up Comments

Rating: 4.7

As i watch you grow up
seeing the smiles in your eyes
watching the love growing inside of you
but still being there when you cry
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emma anderson
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Tanya Stanford 31 August 2008

Perfect advice for any child. Lovely little story. Enjoyed it alot

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Herbert Nehrlich1 19 May 2005

A nice little poem. Now if we could correct the spelling of the word ADVICE that would be great. And there are a few other errors. Thanks for the poem though. Good reading. H

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