Saturday, August 8, 2015

My Address Comments

Rating: 5.0

Vagabonds like me have no address,
In the morning at a mosque,
In the night at a bar!
But why do you look so much for me,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bisma Mirza 09 August 2015

Really Amazingggg ..... great!! 10 on 10

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Valsa George 09 August 2015

An intriguing write which has the suspense and mystery of a thriller! ! Enjoyed!

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Khalid Saifullah 08 August 2015

What a poem, I am amazed! .......................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2015

The right is sweet of joy, The left is bitter of sorrow, ....Stunning write having philosophical ideas. Marvellous one. Thanks you sir for posting such intensive poem. .......10

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Kelly Kurt 08 August 2015

A fascinating write, Akhtar. You use language as the rose uses aroma

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Hazel Durham 08 August 2015

Wonderful write with amazing imagery that sweeps the reader along the journey!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 08 August 2015

Nice journey. Enjoyed the poetic and hallucinating project. Fixed picture is more attractive to penetrate. Thanks.

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