Sunday, June 8, 2014

My Addiction Comments

Rating: 4.7

I'm numb to the pain of loneliness,
Unable to feel its sting,
I can't respond to the emptiness,
Or the despair it used to bring
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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 May 2015

Lovely piece with a descriptive ending.Enjoy.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 June 2014

A lovely poem, written with the heart. I enjoyed reading it.

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Lila Holmes 11 June 2014

I love how all of your poems have relatable messages that everybody has related to some point in their life, very well written Lora.

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Brian Johnston 09 June 2014

Could opiate be too strong a word? It brings up for me fears that I might be blind to the truth and not simply that I am estatic, joyful, or exhilarated. But in any case, and always, I am happy that you are happy.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 June 2014

love on hopeless addict, there's no better drug for life.

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David Lessard 08 June 2014

An opiate called love is a potent substance! Good write.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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