Thursday, April 21, 2011

My Addiction Comments

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Addiction is such a cruel thing
It takes over your whole life
Whatever your poison
It cuts to the core like a knife
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Patti Wilburn Haney
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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 November 2011

Nice poem. The boundaries between addiction and dedication are blurred. In a way addiction has been transformed into a sort of devotion.

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Don Haney 21 April 2011

Sounds like you really care for someone. Well Done, great work! ! :)

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