Wednesday, August 7, 2013

My Abandoned Village Comments

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Trees looked pale along lonely roads
Goats and sheep walked in solitude

The wind fed my mouth with dust
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Babatunde Aremu 07 August 2013

Vey sad. This reminds me of poem: ' The Sea Eats Our Land' By Joseph Karuiki. Africans have neglected their origins. We are contented with Alien Walls' (one of poems) in the city. Great write. I just came back from Cape Coast. I saw this poem practically. Ps read my poems e.g. Point Of No Return and others

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Gajanan Mishra 07 August 2013

empty and rejected, good write.

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