Thursday, December 3, 2015

My 80% Great Limerick Comments

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This poem needs more than just rhyming
It also needs lots of good timing
I know that each line
Must sound mighty fine
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Jim Franckum
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Bri Edwards 26 March 2017

Kim Barney sent me your way. i'll let you add 5% for the alliteration lousy limerick. you may change your title now. bri :) to MyPoemList. are you still on PH? bri :)

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Kim Barney 27 November 2016

I actually laughed out loud at that last line. It took me totally by surprise! This is wonderful! Why hasn't anyone commented on it before?

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