This poem needs more than just rhyming
It also needs lots of good timing
I know that each line
Must sound mighty fine
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I actually laughed out loud at that last line. It took me totally by surprise! This is wonderful! Why hasn't anyone commented on it before?
Kim Barney sent me your way. i'll let you add 5% for the alliteration lousy limerick. you may change your title now. bri :) to MyPoemList. are you still on PH? bri :)