Thursday, August 21, 2008

My 7 Sins Comments

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I'm guilty of my pride,
and gluttony of lust.
Envious of the sloth of wrath,
these 7 I do trust.
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Saint Cynosure
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*Trusting You* 09 November 2008

To take a toll, upon my soul, oh yes great lines. we all have sins its good to have them its the people who think they dont have them are the ones who need the most help. good job. Becca

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Lum Nothing 21 August 2008

I really like your poem. I only counted 5 sins in the poem though. I still like it though.

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