Thursday, June 12, 2008

My 6 Month Girl Comments

Rating: 4.0

I wake up that fire has gone,
always a thousand thoughts, now only one.
Once the first look of frustration in the morning, now a gleaming smile,
true happiness is out there, just sometimes takes a while.
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ADAM WARD
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C. P. Sharma 21 June 2008

Although from that now I retire Through 6 month grand daughter I now feel that fire.

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Marvin Brato 12 June 2008

I had gone the same experienced.... amazing poem. High marks.

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