Monday, December 5, 2005

My 200th Poem Comments

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Thrice a day I write my poems,
The words just come to me,
Ideas flow from Mind to pen,
And end in verses for thee.
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Jonathan Goldman a.k.a JGthepoet
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Cj Heck 05 December 2005

I'll go along with the others - many heartfelt congratulations, Jonathan! That's quite a milestone! Warmest regards, CJ

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***** ********* 05 December 2005

Congratulations Jonathan, I would lose the first 'one in the 2nd verse, two many one's together, for the flow. I hope you are well and look forward to reading more of your work. All the best Tai

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