Monday, April 13, 2009

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never to be busy any more to you...
you are my works all which i do...
you are my life all which i live for...
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hazem al jaber
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Maria Barbara Korynt 14 April 2009

Poem 'hot' and it - is a feeling. Chosen your 'lyric hero' must be a really unusual woman. Your poems, it is one great emotion. Very much pleasantly and in reality you are describing it what your hero feels. Sweet. I like it. :) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Catrina Heart 13 April 2009

Truly heartfelt and touching verses of sincerity.........lovely poem.

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