the echo of fierce tongue lives in my brain
years have passed, still, stain remains stain
the fulsome ally childishly involved in mutual game
to blame the truth teller in defense of disown shame
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You nailed it again Doc! Everyone reading this powerfully written poem can relate to it. It brings out all sorts of emotions & that's what great poetry is all about! Great summary of main factors involved in painful & failed relationships. When there's misunderstanding of good intentions, unfair criticism, two-faced dealings, the trust is destroyed & relationship lost. Love the ending. Doc you are always full of surprises. Just amazing!