Mutiny Comments

interesting poem /// nice

It will guide your ship to the boiling bay It's we who rise as clouds and fall as rains Fall on the sand and on the burning clay Or be prepared for a mutiny of deadly pains. do nt mutiny u alone here comment on me of course KM JI is known for his generosity u have stopped visitig me JAJI Naraaaz toe naheen

A wonderful imaginative write on nature. Powerful and thought provoking write.10++++

writ: a form of written command in the name of a court or other legal authority ok. stanza 4: it's or its? i don't know. Kelly K. is probably more 'intelligent' and 'scientific' than i am, and has more understanding of the poem. alas, i am a bit lost, though i like the sound and flow of it. what/who is mutinying? fish? ? bri ;)

I enjoyed the poem, and loved the title.