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Muted By The Hood Of Sweet Repentance Comments

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This oath I swore, my heart was younger then,
impatience ruled and stormed the realm of night,
horrors cast where the bloodlet stains are penned
my fortunes mired, insured by ways of might.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 September 2017

Heart was younger then impatience that ruled and stormed the realm of night and this was thought provoking. The oath you swore insured you in the way of might to regain light in life to break the night. Question came but you became bold in wisdom. We heard sweet repentance. Wonderful poem is brilliantly composed and shared.10

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