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This makes me feel very calm, and it makes the world feel like a tapestry, I think it is good writing.

excellent imageries and a surprising ending i liked...well you caught me off guard by your skillful write, Deva...10

Wonderful moonlit imagery. Very beautiful, Deva. A mother and a poet, a very appealing combination. Love, Sandra

Very nice...I like the way the poem flows.

Beautiful poem for your child Deva....enchanting images....Fi 10+++