Monday, November 30, 2009

! Mutation Comments

Rating: 2.9

Blood is bitter nor sweet,
not even sour,
it seems a taste of death,
blended with ashes and dust,
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Rafique Farooqi
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Akhtar Jawad 12 December 2018

A thoughtful poem, so nicely penned, blood is blood and nothing else.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2009

peace glitters like mirage, man mutates to monster, when life is bitter than death. strong desire for lasting peace. a lovely and beautiful poem. unique and marvalous wayo fputting it....10 read mine territorial integrity...martyres

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Catrina Heart 30 November 2009

fabulous poetry shared...your choice of words are unique now and strong! ! ! well done.....

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Ejaz Khan 30 November 2009

A poetic heart yearning for peace and tranquility, beautifully expressed! 10

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Lady Grace 30 November 2009

when mutants play the role of monsters, i am sure it is inhuman...but when mutants are programmed to do good works, so they are human...ur piece is nice...

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profound and heartfelt poem.. when newborn screams for life, sun blazes the sands, peace glitters like mirage, man mutates to monster, when life is bitter than death.

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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