Thursday, November 6, 2014

Mutated Species.. Comments

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Who has laid the dark blankets,
Hiding all good shine from the eyes,
Nocturnal animals are always here,
Chasing every other weak in despair.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Bri Edwards 15 November 2014

my favorite lines: Showering of the rain allowed, The rays of hope, hard to pass through. ............ you make it sound pretty/awfully bleak! : ( i really enjoyed the rhythm. it sways as i read it silently. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 November 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 06 November 2014

Who has cordoned the perimeter, With the tapes of ignorant rulers, very nice story expressed behind this poem and lesson oriented. Nice job on sharing such beautiful poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 November 2014

very farcical - you wrote this poem interesting and wonderfully good

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Gajanan Mishra 06 November 2014

rays of hopes.. I am reading and reading again and again this poem..

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