Friday, September 13, 2013

Must We Always Part In Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just as the myriad of colors begin to tumble
Just as the sweating summer waves her final farewell
Just as the winds change from gentle breezes,
To the threat of gales...
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Susan Lacovara
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Elisha Chhabra 26 April 2014

I'm so touched by this poem of you. I can feel every line of this.. Seriously, you gave the sad apart moment words, wonderfully. Loved it!

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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

I have always felt as if there is something sad being whispered by the leaves of autumn... whispers of goodbyes... I think autumn is a good time for goodbyes... and winter's rest makes room for spring... well penned bittersweet remorse.

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Mark Heathcote 04 January 2014

Beautiful, his going is well expressed and the longing for him to stay is palpable.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 September 2013

A sad, but very, very sweet poem. I am moved! Thanks for the beautiful note too. The title is eye catching, heart touching. Over all, an excellent poem.10/10. 'I hide my heart in my hip pocket, Pretend that I can rake up all my sorrow seeing you leave... Only to watch the temperature dropping Like my tears...' This feels heavy with emotion. I can imagine how I would have felt, the same feeling. 'Now you too, are harvested from me... And sent to a Farmer's Market, southward bound....' So sweet! I haven't read such beautiful lines for many days now. Soft love, much akin to our culture, how our women feel in similar situation, thanks! 'Aware I'll soon take to my solitary strolls...alone All the while singing songs I hope will carry on the breeze to you.' Your songs are singing lullaby to my ears. 'Must we always part in Autumn As if the seasons do not know how much I love you.' Sigh....................................................................................

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Susan Lacovara

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