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Great even rhythm throughout your poem, Aftab. Again, when you make a point in your poetry your message comes through loud and clear. Yes, our dreams must be searched through to find out what their worth is in our lives. An excellent poem, Aftab, I loved it. RoseAnn

a poem sweetly written with a harsh necessity.

I love the very music of your poem.A good message for us.