Thursday, September 8, 2005

Must It Be So? Comments

Rating: 4.8

We were sleeping
When the dirty water
Came rushing down,
Drowning our arrogance
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Pamela Davison
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Max Reif 10 September 2005

Totally immediate, and ending this one with the question in the air that demands to be asked, feels completely appropriate to me. 'brave old world'-perfect, and amazingly, I've never heard that before!

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Kay Francis 08 September 2005

Why indeed? There is a sophistication in this piece that I've not seen in some of the other disaster pieces I've read. The work is intelligent, compassionate, and yet, almost in my face with regret. I loved the conflicting emotions this piece brings to mind. You must be a very unique, brilliant woman: =)

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Maggie Flanagan-Wilkie 08 September 2005

I like where you went with the opening that you read to me. Great perspective, Sis.

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