Tuesday, April 3, 2007

Must I Face This Day? Comments

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Must I face this clear bright day?
With heavy Heart
and sorrowful soul?
The sunlight ebbs and flows
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Heather Z. Hanna
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Brian Dorn 12 April 2007

'My mind slips on its muddy path' Nicely put, Heather... a great line in a great poem! Brian

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Dee Daffodil 04 April 2007

This is very touching. It sounds like a difficult decision to make indeed. You've written this very well, and I love the imagery you've used. Hugs, dee

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Karen Summers 04 April 2007

Your words touched me, the last three lines were written beautifully, , , , , my eyes welled up with tears for you. Keep writing. Take care

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Heather Z. Hanna

Heather Z. Hanna

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