Muslims Display The Victory Symbol, Holding A Photo Of Osama Ben Laden Comments

It's so hard to write a social conscience poem without it becoming didactic, which I think happened here and some of your other recent work. However, my sentiments are with you.

Rolling back the pages of time to the beginning to find the causes - interesting idea. Wonder what would be our attitude if we could roll the pages of time FORWARD to the end of time? ? Scarlett

On form Max. It leads the reader through. Grand stuff.

This isn't as good as the piece you posted earlier Max. I think this comes across as preaching to the converted. There are also assumptions made in this which I find dubious (but that's another story) . That said, I think the final two stanzas are excellent.

Max. Excellent. Thought-provoking and accurate. And shame on... so many. Nothing to add, except for a thank you. t x