Tuesday, December 14, 2010

Muslim Comments

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Those who are muslims just for name,
They really Islam defame,
No future they have nor any aim,
Like a candle without flame.
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Mahtab Bangalee 07 October 2019

MUSLIM to me TOTAL SURRENDERED HUMAN BEING TO THE ULTIMATE ALMIGHTY!

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Spiritual Seeker 02 July 2011

You have said it very well...a very strong and true message.

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Hans Vr 01 July 2011

This is very well written. A thorough wisdom, poetically expressed.

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Shadow Girl 29 June 2011

You have a talent for gettin across an important meaning in few words. They say a picture paints a thousand words....i think your words paint a thousand pictures in the minds of many.....well done....keep writing. SG

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Whispering Rose 14 June 2011

very true, i hope we're more like the real Muslims or at least try to be

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Faith Ali 17 January 2011

full of right meanings.. yeah, that's what all should know cause not anyone called Muslim is Muslim, and Islam not just a word.. keeeeep writing......

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Lee Mack 24 December 2010

Thanks for poems One of many worlds born empty of all men (Mankind) must have had one or many poems each of these poems must have more love than all men put together... right - writes

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Leela Devi 24 December 2010

full of realism all through/ keep writing

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Amy Marie 16 December 2010

Nice rhyme scheme :)

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Luke Easter 15 December 2010

James 1: 22, 'don't just be hearers of the word but doers of the word'

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 December 2010

Very soothing. Islam can't be judged today by what muslims act. Muslim is one whose hands and tongue never harm others. Actually there are some so called intellectuals including world media are busy in defaming Islam. Islam is the religion of peace. A muslim should not act repugnant to the teaching of Quran. When he does so, he turns an eye sore to everyone's eye and thus he becomes the source of its defamation. So if we wish to judge Islam, we should study its teachings. I really liked your poem. Very poignant indeed.

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Ata Ata 15 December 2010

You compare religion to a tree, and that's great because a tree is symbol of wisdom and peace, I am sure that wise people know true meaning of being muslim, I know it, thanks for sharing thoughts through poetry.

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Jenny Gordon 14 December 2010

I like it since it seems to give a better, more true perspective on Islam. And yet, you must admit Islam is also very damning to stubborn unbelievers, very unforgiving. But it does offer to the unwitting world the purer side of Islam.

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Malaya Roses 14 December 2010

Simple words but carry a very true fact about the religion. To those who think they are real Muslim by words and rhetoric just like a parasite towards religion. Promoting peace by kindness and compassion with no prejudice or bias..... that is the true meaning of religion. Realistic poem.

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Cs Vishwanathan 14 December 2010

I fully endorse David Bion.

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David Aoloch Bion 14 December 2010

I love the poem i wish all pious read it

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Mohammad Muzzammil

Mohammad Muzzammil

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