*musky Vale Of Tunes* Poem by Dr subhendu kar

*musky Vale Of Tunes*

Rating: 4.9


Earth feels sorrow sun when shadowed
ocean kills its a waves by stillness
grin is the flow of green by completeness
moon never stops its beams as when reflected
as tide is rave up of ocean as aroused

goodness prevails by sweet friend as always
Nothing defies at all beyond and within
time flows in its lofty veil of tunes betiding
smile touches even cliff of heaven enshrining

sizzling rain entices crowd by summer
Yet fountain flows hurriedly by cascading
blinking star intones from far off distance
Moon still elicits love by coolness in heart

night slowly paints the art of love
let joy and sorrow walk hand in hand
joy and fear trudge path being far away
friends binds together in their own ways
are we not same as we are as we were and eve?
life is a seamless stream along glow eternal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 29 July 2009

night slowly paints the art of love let joy and sorrow walk hand in hand joy and fear trudge path being far away friends binds together in their own ways are we not same as we are as we were and eve? life is a seamless stream along glow eternal ----------- lovely just as lovely as the other poems.....meaningful and rich piece! ! !

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 July 2009

Muskiness prevails in each and every word of this beautifully written poem. Fine and lively tunes sound in every line. Friendliness is the essence.......Well done Dr. Kar........10/10.

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Ramesh T A 26 May 2009

Play of words enriches the meaning of your poem! Best wishes!

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Malini Kadir 24 May 2009

you capture the imaginations.......in a musky vale of tunes!

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Naidz Ladia 23 May 2009

'friends bind together in their own ways'...i qoute this line..all lines before and after of this line fits the title..i'll just add few words for this piece..regardless of whatever, friends are friends...naizz

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Bharati Nayak 04 December 2015

'joy and fear trudge path being far away friends binds together in their ownways are we not same as we are as as we were and eve? life is a seamless stream along glow eternal

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Estrella Baldemosa 27 March 2010

'night slowly paints the art of love let joy and sorrow walk hand in hand' Isn't it always? why oh why? so true... a well done poem. thanks for the comments.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Ezna Stephna 28 October 2009

joy and fear trudge path being far away - be brave to walk, don't fear the path is the path of life no ones knows where it ends, .......life is a seamless stream along glow eternal......... friends binds together in their own ways - friends are friends whose mind you cannot read as today they are sweet and tomorrow they become bitter...........very meaningful poem with taste of reality 10 x 10x 10x 10....... congratulation poet

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Tsira Goge 07 September 2009

are we not same as we are as we were and eve? life is a seamless stream along glow eternal .................................................................. Subhendu, It that forces us to think about the god... Very strong poem, good luck - in all and everywhere.. 10x10.. Tsira

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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