Tuesday, January 17, 2006

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It's always amazing the lies people tell,
When nothing is fine and all isn't well,
When nothing and no one is quite what they seem,
And happiness dies like the fragilest dream.
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Williams Neisha
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Nimal Dunuhinga 30 March 2006

Good omen of a novice poetess! honestly speaking.

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B Stokes 17 January 2006

Yeah, she gets all her ideas from her awesome AP students...Muahahahaha. Really Ms. Williams, that was great. You should write more...'Oh it's not gonna be that great but I said I'd do it so here goes nothin'....' Yeah, I hear ya. Lol. See ya on the flip side!

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i absolutely love this poem..the message being sent so strong and vivid...you are some talented writer that's for sure! ! !

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Williams Neisha

Williams Neisha

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