Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Musings(Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

roses know
they are beautiful
hence, keep thorn guards
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Sathya Narayana
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Fay Slimm 23 December 2008

Love your openings in this peice Sathya - - the imagery used is excellent - and it opns up to the main body of the poem which has it's own surprise ending too.... very well put together........ from Fay a 10

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Tarun Sharma 30 November 2008

amazed at the simplicity of the beautiful! rgds

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 November 2008

Ammmmmazing! Used allegories are multi-faced Rose oh rose! 10++

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 23 November 2008

HEY BFULLY ARRANGED STRING OF HAIKUS..

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Reshma Ramesh 22 November 2008

superb observation...especially the last lines...........good write

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Indira Babbellapati 19 November 2008

i always like pithy expressions...joy to read!

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Annie Girl 19 November 2008

awsome excellent keeping it real and true nice work

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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