Saturday, October 24, 2015

Musings At A Poetry Class Comments

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Her lipstick is irresistible,
So Red!
So begging to be crushed by other lips.
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Eugene Levich
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Bri Edwards 03 June 2016

You are making me VERY hungry! ! Her seductive bright red lips, Like the cherry they once held, So sweet and yet a bit salty; I did not eat them; I just smelled. Not sun-bleached; 'twas just blond, Her bush, matching her fair, pale skin. I could not resist the allure longer, And she moaned when I dug within... Her inner temple of excitement, On that her college graduation night. Her muscles, they all tight went, And I released my gift into her temple tight. Her hands were all a flutter, like a butterfly. And tears welled up in her eyes that night; To this day, fifty years later, I still do not know why. ====== Shall I put this into June's showcase and give you credit for my inspiration? ? Ha ha. Bri :)

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Eugene Levich 04 June 2016

You absolutely should- your poem is far better than mine!

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