Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Thursday, October 10, 2019

Musical Mishmash Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm gonna make you love me
The last time
Things we said today
How sweet it is
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Kim Barney
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Spock The Vegan 11 October 2019

Good idea. +While I agree that it is as good as some of the poems here, I think it could be better if rearranged. I think I'll write one based on song titles. Thanks for the inspiration (again) .

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Kim Barney 13 October 2019

Thank you, Spock. I have written two more, where I did rearrange the titles. Mishmash 2 is only four lines, but Mishmash 3 has sixteen lines.

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Darwin Henry Beuning 11 October 2019

Kim, All great songs! ! I like your poem title! ! !

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Kim Barney 13 October 2019

Thanks Hank!

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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