He writes so many sheets of music,
Ideas bouncing around his head,
But financial times are hard,
And he has music to burn,
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Music to burn always better than money to burn. Not a bad poem. I'm amazed at the content and topic. I wondered if shorter sentences might bring forth hat punch. Only a thought but how might you do it?
It was a marvellous poem written with great skill and wisdom. Great imagery and a fine style. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.