Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Music, The Dance Of Waves Comments

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On the shore of soul she rises as a tide,
The dried sand that is hot and burning,
Lo it’s wet and now it’s turning,
In the dreamy eyes of a smiling bride,
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Salini Nair 10 March 2015

She is now a rainbow of seven melodies, Her colors have conquered the hard stones, .......................beautiful

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Sarmad Mirza 03 March 2015

Music is surely the dance of waves

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Valsa George 27 February 2015

I am now dancing but not all alone, The entire universe is dancing with me, A heightened moment of beauty and elation, creating ripples of joy in the readers also! Enjoyed!

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 February 2015

A lovely poem.........................10

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 25 February 2015

The rainbow of seven melodies with dance of wave form the colourful music. All the creatures dance with favour and flavour. The git of music is love. All have this for Allah, the merciful father. Beautiful imagery in this poem makes this very much special. Nicely penned excellent poem.

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