Wednesday, July 22, 2020

Music Out Of Tune Comments

Rating: 5.0

Jazz just not the same
After you damn died
Piano out of tune
Words so distorted
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Richard Wlodarski
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Unwritten Soul 03 August 2020

The poem was so cool, its brilliant... The poetic swim beautifully through ears to mind

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Mj Lemon 30 July 2020

Richard, this is brilliant! You have me reaching for Blues and Haikus. I'll be listening this evening. This verse goes to myfavourites.

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Masoud Madhoush 26 July 2020

hello richard, that was marvellous

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 July 2020

One of your best poems from your extended Korouc series my friend! Enjoyed the fantastic rhythm of this great little poem...............10/10

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