Thursday, January 1, 2004

Music I Heard Comments

Rating: 3.1

Music I heard with you was more than music,
And bread I broke with you was more than bread;
Now that I am without you, all is desolate;
All that was once so beautiful is dead.
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Conrad Potter Aiken
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Chinedu Dike 18 January 2023

Wonderful poem with beautiful rhyme scheme.

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Brian Jani 19 June 2014

I like this poem keep it up Mr Aiken

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David Evans 30 May 2009

A slight correction should be made to the text of this lovely poem: The first line of the third stanza never included the word 'that.' The poem reads much more fluently without it, and Aiken was nothing if not 'fluid' in his stories and poems.

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Next to the ROAD NOT TAKEN by Robert Frost this is my second favorite poem.

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Conrad Potter Aiken

Conrad Potter Aiken

Savannah, Georgia
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