Sunday, November 18, 2018

Music Has Spread Every Space Comments

Rating: 5.0

Glittering was City Street by morning sun chariot
singing song by birds it sounds Kitchi Bitchi
Wind was murmured as little bee that was a sweet melody among the misty
Guitar with men sang tuneful song beside the street
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Chaminda Pushpadewa
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A nice poem where the birds sing melodiously with different tones and sounds.I like the sound effects given to the poem of the bird's music like kitchi bitchi, " klatches, klatches" " sata pata" krahea…..krahea…. A sweet melody and a lullaby too, Pushpadeva! .......10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 November 2018

Inguruwattadewage, such a splendid write....................

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Chinedu Dike 18 November 2018

Well thought-out and nicely written with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing.

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Chaminda Pushpadewa 18 November 2018

thanks for comments

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