notes floating melodically by
soft hums of eerie lullabies
stir hauntingly in the stale air
somberly carrying memories
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Memorable writing! ! ! ! it such a good subject to recall the memory........and like a music box that singing in loop, round and round..with numb movement...you deliver all feelings so cool telling all you have passed and locked in the box..it sound beautiful but the song still the same, the dancing melody will never played outside the box...Nice write_Unwritten Soul
This is really beautiful. The meaning so profound. A marionette on a string, singing to the tunes of others. But our hearts' music box likes to play its own music, because only oneself can hear the song...
Dancing to life's melody... If only we were in charge of the key... Very nice poem..
I really like this poem. Short and to the point - very descriptive.
This is a really beautiful poem Silentpoet Grl. I echo Romeo and Crimson. But on a personal note, this poem explains the sad, sad life of a music box marionette.10+++++++ God bless, and thank you ever so much for sharing.
Beauty radiates through this amazing and melodious write that really moved me. Talent is also filtered through this masterpiece! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
This poem is Brilliant, Truly a phenomenal piece. I believe this is my favorite of yours! Every line was simply immaculate! :)
Great Poem Silentpoet Grl, This is Richard McClellan, I am on my girlfriends computer...
My favourite Sp. Every word echoes beauty. Brilliant.