Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Music And Lyrics Comments

Rating: 4.8

What is the music?
The music is blood
Flowing endlessly
The music is the blood
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Ashley Storey
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Jimmy Magee O'kane 16 June 2009

i love your use of (is it Namibian) local dialects? 'rhythums' -fantastic! i feel you still need to discuss more fully the metaphysical and phenomenological implications of your opening strophe. keep her country!

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Egi David Perdana 02 January 2009

music is soul my friends

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Lan Yuham 12 June 2008

zhe shou shige feichang you qishi.ri, hai bu neng shiyong(speake) hanyu(chinese) the poem is surging forward with great momentum

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Benjamin O'Brien 11 June 2008

That is awesome! The relation to the music and the body is great. I really like it (: x

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Ashley Storey

Ashley Storey

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