What is the music?
The music is blood
Flowing endlessly
The music is the blood
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zhe shou shige feichang you qishi.ri, hai bu neng shiyong(speake) hanyu(chinese) the poem is surging forward with great momentum
That is awesome! The relation to the music and the body is great. I really like it (: x
i love your use of (is it Namibian) local dialects? 'rhythums' -fantastic! i feel you still need to discuss more fully the metaphysical and phenomenological implications of your opening strophe. keep her country!