She used to make him smile brightly
but now she leaves him bleeding profusely from the pen__
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oh my, ted, you threw me for a loop with the bukowski allusion at the end... however i can see the analogs to his work throughout.. really, you are skilled.
Ted, this is amazing! A wonderful parody of a poet admired and loathed in equal measure. But regardless, your work stands on its own beligerent feet with flair and bite. I am impressed. love, Allie xxxx