Friday, September 4, 2020

Muse Of Nature Comments

Rating: 4.6

When the sky is gloomy with dark clouds
In dark and dreary colour of despair
A rainbow appears through the drizzle
Like a smile amidst falling tears
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 September 2020

A brilliant short work sir! Appreciated the perceptive expression in its absolute brevity and precision.....10/10

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Thank you very much dear Dr.Dillip for the comments and appreciation

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Rajnish Manga 04 September 2020

Like a smile amidst falling tears ..a ray of hope pierce through pain.... //.... An imagery- so lovely and so soulful. The poem paints the scene so skillfully that it becomes a masterpiece. It goes into MyPoemList.

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Thank you Rajnishji for the comments and for adding it to your poem list. The destiny of those who are made to smile through their tears is painful

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Varsha M 04 September 2020

Very well assessed and beautifully penned and rainbow absorbing tears again... And a ray of hope make way for light to pierce through gloomy pain. Beautiful conception. Thank-you sir.

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Thank you Varsha for your instant comments and keen observation. Rainbows appear in the sky soaked in rain the tears of clouds. A rainbow is a hope thta pierce through the sorrowful pain

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