Tuesday, December 8, 2020

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Rating: 5.0

standing naked to a gathered few
but painted white
you danced
flowering, as from a mother's womb,
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Clive Culverhouse
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Clive Culverhouse 05 September 2023

I was very pleased with this poem, it has an Earth over many ions feel about it, a developement of human existence over time in the magic of ancient flames, plus it has a seductive, feel, the dancer being mother earth herself in all her wonder and beauty.

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