Tuesday, August 20, 2024

Murmurs Of The Heart - 5 Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life's canvas
is monochrome blue.
When he came into my life,
it was slathered
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 October 2024

Still think it was wonderful TFS

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 October 2024

life's canvas with resplendent hues - perfect! Thank you dear friend....Top score & to my favourite

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Terence George Craddock 29 August 2024

p3a monochrome blue life metamorphosis transforms into rainbow colours resplendent hues in leaping light when true love lover transcendence enters canvas, repaints tortured life in found Cinderella slipper perfection fit moment written in ephemeral eternity

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Terence George Craddock 02 September 2024

I wrote the poem 'Search Quest Cinderella Slipper Perfection Fit Moment', inspired by the poem 'Murmurs Of The Heart - 5', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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Terence George Craddock 29 August 2024

p2etch deep purple bruises, blue moon monochrome blue haunts souls silent in stillness night, a monochrome blue life may be repainted with colours to delight, like a rainbow trout leaping from water up a waterfall in mist spray water droplets,

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Terence George Craddock 02 September 2024

I wrote the poems 'Love Repaints Torn Blue Life: In New Life Breath Hues' and 'Rainbow Trout Leap Surpass: Olympic Gold Medal Heights', inspired by the poem 'Murmurs Of The Heart - 5', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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Terence George Craddock 29 August 2024

p1life recent might have been traumatic like a series of severe storm fronts rolling in violent lightening thunder storms, battering life's canvas leaving scars like moon lunar comet strike impact craters, a series of monochrome blue ripe rotten bruises litter moonscape dark shadows

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Terence George Craddock 02 September 2024

I wrote the poems 'Blue Moon Monochrome Blue Haunts' and 'Life Recent Battered Body Crimes', inspired by the poem 'Murmurs Of The Heart - 5', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 August 2024

Marvelous Bravo Thanks for sharing Rose Marie

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Anjandev Roy 21 August 2024

Wonderful short work..... thank u...Rose Marie....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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