Murmurs Of The Heart - 3 Comments

So beautifully and insightfully expressed.

p2to dawn light piercing darkness black mass ink darkest night, new trust gentle fragile waking within lover's arms into life long spell cast true love eternity

p1within the grey lifeless ashes of an incinerated heart, a single spell casting stirring kiss can phoenix fire resurrect new born heart, with quivering fresh birth pulse ripples heart wakes in memories untold fear past horror betrayed,

Love struck eyes, heart filled with butterflies, underneath starry skies.......

So beautifully and exhilaratingly expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++

Ever so heart touching and yet powerful! .. The emotions that love can stir magnificently captured here! ..

Wonderful Rose-Marie Just love it TFS! ! ! ! !

Love with fear is a complex heart murmur!

Simply excellent.... thanks for sharing...

Your splendid poem skillfully conveys the idea that the intensity of love, can sometimes be terrifying.

So succinctly, you've summed up what love is all about. Such a very beautiful poem, Rose Marie!

Beautifully expressed with deep feelings and great finesse. Deeply felt. Bravo! .