Friday, July 11, 2025

Murmurs Of The Heart - 25 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have been counting my tears
And your memory fades
Like thick gray clouds
That blot out the sun.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 21 July 2025

Beautifully beautifully shared! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 21 July 2025

Can feel the warmth of the sun as the thick gray clouds fade! .. And the heart is once again touched by the sun's ray's....

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Rebecca Navarre 21 July 2025

Ever so Beautifully expressed! .. Ever so heart moving! ..

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Kim Barney 19 July 2025

One of your best in recent memories. Excellent work.

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Isadora Quagmire 14 July 2025

Absolutely beautiful! ! ! Amazingly written, thank you so much for blessing us with your poetry! I love your 'Murmurs Of The Heart' poems, thanks for writing another : )

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Rob Lamberton 14 July 2025

I like the depth of this poem covering a gamut of experiences and emotions!

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Anjandev Roy 12 July 2025

That blot out the sun..... brilliant and perfect.... thank you...

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Timber Koleden 12 July 2025

An excellent summary of grief. We are saddened by the happy memories, yet somehow gladdened. Thank you for sharing!

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Jayne Louise Davies 12 July 2025

Love this Rose Marie x Thanks for sharing *****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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