I have been counting my tears
And your memory fades
Like thick gray clouds
That blot out the sun.
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I like the depth of this poem covering a gamut of experiences and emotions!
That blot out the sun..... brilliant and perfect.... thank you...
An excellent summary of grief. We are saddened by the happy memories, yet somehow gladdened. Thank you for sharing!
Absolutely beautiful! ! ! Amazingly written, thank you so much for blessing us with your poetry! I love your 'Murmurs Of The Heart' poems, thanks for writing another : )