I have been counting my tears
And your memory fades
Like thick gray clouds
That blot out the sun.
My tears are pierced
By its warm rays.
Copyright 2025, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
An excellent summary of grief. We are saddened by the happy memories, yet somehow gladdened. Thank you for sharing!
That blot out the sun..... brilliant and perfect.... thank you...
I like the depth of this poem covering a gamut of experiences and emotions!
Beautifully beautifully shared! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++
Can feel the warmth of the sun as the thick gray clouds fade! .. And the heart is once again touched by the sun's ray's....
Absolutely beautiful! ! ! Amazingly written, thank you so much for blessing us with your poetry! I love your 'Murmurs Of The Heart' poems, thanks for writing another : )
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love this Rose Marie x Thanks for sharing *****