Murmurs Of The Heart - 2 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Murmurs Of The Heart - 2

Rating: 5.0

Am I that insignificant?
Why she never looked my way?

I placed my heart on the petals
of the deep velvety roses.
And she is always
gazing at me,
loving me.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan -Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

rose can be stealth coy at stealing hearts, the intensity of wax velvet colours/ perfect perfection in variety shifting designs/ a musk in face nose if breathing in rose perfume/ even the thorns sharp warn come closer embrace me

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I wrote the poem 'Rose Can Be Stealth Coy At Stealing Hearts', inspired by the poem 'Murmurs Of The Heart - 2', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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Rob Lamberton 09 July 2024

Yes, "I placed my heart on the petals" of her "deep velvety roses" and I can't stop looking at her either! Smiles!

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Kevin Patrick 13 July 2024

This reminds me of that quote by Anais Nin 'We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are.' its our reflection of what we look. The Rose is only the rose because of what we impart it to be. Still we always find beauty, even if its our perceptions of it. Great continuation of pt 1

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 July 2024

Lovely, enjoyable reading, Rose Marie. Thank you for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 20 July 2024

Your deep love of roses is so exquisitely expressed in this beautiful poem, Rose Marie. I've always wondered about the thorns. After all, are they not protecting the fragile nature of such precious beauty? !

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Rebecca Navarre 16 July 2024

Beyond # ING And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 16 July 2024

With words that speak right to the heart! .. For me to try an say how magnificently beautiful my words would come out understated! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 16 July 2024

Absolutely Beautiful! ... This is so beautifully composed! ..

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Sandra Feldman 14 July 2024

This poem as the painful and wanting sadness of a solitary rose. Just beautiful. And of long-lasting pose.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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