Darkness
that is kept awake
By the night's
Unceasing murmurs
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This speaks with a beauty that i could not put into words! .. Awesome! ..+++++++++++++++++
Oh, Wow! .. So beautifully beautifully painted! .. Awesome imagery and feel to this! .. Ever so marvelous! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
Your words of appreciation are invaluable, Becca. Obliged, Dear Poet.
I get unceasing murmers at night, by the trains going by 50 metres away! !
That could be quite disturbing… but I spoke about the murmurs from within.
I have posted a little note on Dilipji's comments. I don't know whether PoemHunter will carry it or not. Nowadays ph is playing truant again.
As usual, Dilipji, you are the first person to read my poem. And your words make my day, sir. Thank you.
So nice of you, Dilipji, to put your appreciation of the poem in so many words.
My rejoinders to Dilipji and Becca have vanished.. Truant PoemHunter!