Friday, March 4, 2022

Murmurs Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness
that is kept awake
By the night's
Unceasing murmurs
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

My rejoinders to Dilipji and Becca have vanished.. Truant PoemHunter!

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Rebecca Navarre 09 March 2022

This speaks with a beauty that i could not put into words! .. Awesome! ..+++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 09 March 2022

Oh, Wow! .. So beautifully beautifully painted! .. Awesome imagery and feel to this! .. Ever so marvelous! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 March 2022

Your words of appreciation are invaluable, Becca. Obliged, Dear Poet.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

My heart goes to you, Becca, for the nice words

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 06 March 2022

Smooth and rhythmic poetry. Full *****

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2022

Dr Nehal, so obliged

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David Wood 05 March 2022

I get unceasing murmers at night, by the trains going by 50 metres away! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 March 2022

That could be quite disturbing… but I spoke about the murmurs from within.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

I have posted a little note on Dilipji's comments. I don't know whether PoemHunter will carry it or not. Nowadays ph is playing truant again.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

This is a wonderful poem Unnikrishnan ji...loved it

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

As usual, Dilipji, you are the first person to read my poem. And your words make my day, sir. Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 March 2022

So nice of you, Dilipji, to put your appreciation of the poem in so many words.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

My gratitude for the words of appreciation

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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