Friday, May 29, 2009

Murmured Voices Comments

Rating: 4.0

Murmured voices from another room
Hushed in traditional reverence
Mourning in silence the English way
Awkward conversations of time lost
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Rory Hudson 29 May 2009

I agree with Joe. The rather sad cobwebby feeling of age is well conveyed by the slow, restrained pace of the poem. Well done.

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Joseph Poewhit 29 May 2009

Get that stuffy feeling from the words

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