Monday, January 13, 2003

Murderers Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was my best and oldest friend.
I'd known him all my life.
And yet I'm sure towards the end
He knew I loved his wife,
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Robert William Service
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It was murder indeed! the way it was described was just super and the way you wrote it was very nice the rhyming was wonderful!

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Dedan Onyango 19 July 2015

Murderers indeed I like the simple flow of the poem and the strength of the lines in each stanza.

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