My husband loved me, pity the fool,
We met when I was young,
When I was eager to please,
And grateful for his love,
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A frightening tale but so well written we feel that we are witnessing that woman's life so sadly, smitten, Good show!
Murder on My Mind is worst than real killing.5 Stars full for this eerie poem, but very excellent read.
I am sure he does not read poems, excellent poem by a fantastic mind. Top Stars already given above. Have reread this treasure, truly still a great pleasure!
More than a thriller it seems to be the story of every woman. A bit funny though. Thank you
I will now rot in a prison cell, My husband's body cold in the ground, And I shall reflect on the hate, That destroyed a lifetime of marriage. i liked this final stanza teaching an important lesson. liked your poem very much. thank you. tony
Chilling. I sincerely hope this was all from your fertile imagination!
My husband's body cold in the ground, And I shall reflect on the hate, That destroyed a lifetime of marriage. An excellent poem on the topic of vengeance, Where hatred being the strong force plays its part.Very well expressed.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Very well written, with brio and passion. Moves like a well-directed film. You see and feel the characters and their emotions, their life. The magic of great poetry is proudly reflected in this unforgettable work.