Tuesday, December 16, 2014

Murder On My Mind Comments

Rating: 4.8

My husband loved me, pity the fool,
We met when I was young,
When I was eager to please,
And grateful for his love,
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Sandra Feldman 17 April 2022

Very well written, with brio and passion. Moves like a well-directed film. You see and feel the characters and their emotions, their life. The magic of great poetry is proudly reflected in this unforgettable work.

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Sandra Feldman 27 October 2021

A frightening tale but so well written we feel that we are witnessing that woman's life so sadly, smitten, Good show!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 September 2021

Very powerful

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 September 2021

Murder on My Mind is worst than real killing.5 Stars full for this eerie poem, but very excellent read.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 January 2023

I am sure he does not read poems, excellent poem by a fantastic mind. Top Stars already given above. Have reread this treasure, truly still a great pleasure!

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Khairul Ahsan 13 March 2020

Oh my God! Hope, it's only an imagination.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 12 August 2019

More than a thriller it seems to be the story of every woman. A bit funny though. Thank you

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 November 2015

I will now rot in a prison cell, My husband's body cold in the ground, And I shall reflect on the hate, That destroyed a lifetime of marriage. i liked this final stanza teaching an important lesson. liked your poem very much. thank you. tony

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Kim Barney 30 December 2014

Chilling. I sincerely hope this was all from your fertile imagination!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 23 December 2014

My husband's body cold in the ground, And I shall reflect on the hate, That destroyed a lifetime of marriage. An excellent poem on the topic of vengeance, Where hatred being the strong force plays its part.Very well expressed.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 December 2014

Sad story with the lesson thanks for share

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 December 2014

Sad story with the lesson thanks for share

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